Wednesday, March 30, 2016


Nora : Yes Torvald I've come to a decision I'm leaving so I can better myself.

Torvald: [in disbelief] Nora what's with the  capricious decision.... I thought we were fine!

Nora: Nothing is fine between us since your  reaction was all about how your saved and I'm just not important. Even thought I saved your life.

Torvald:[suddenly rejoicing making a tumultuous sound then after hearing her finish is in complete shock ] Oh Nora I knew you couldn't stay away, I'll take that at least. But wait Nora --.

 Nora:[ suppressing him]  I don't want to hear it, I'm not coming back for you, I'm only returning every once in a while to see my children. 

 Nora: I'm not going to disappear from there life completely.

 Torvald: But your abandoning me!

 Nora: [ feeling as if she blundered by speaking to him] It's always about you! But not anymore I'm leaving, and my return will only be brief and for my children. Never forget that.

Torvald : Nora my little skylark, please don't go.... I love you.

Nora: [In shock] You-- love me!?... yet not enough to give up your honor to say the one supposedly love.

Nora:[walking towards the doorway] Bye Torvald tell the children I'll be back soon, but only for them.
 

2 comments:

  1. I love how you ended it with Nora still having the same motives with leaving Torvald, but made it that she will still care for her children. I honestly think that was the only thing that made me want to change the ending. I think Nora should still have some contact with her children and not shut them out completely.

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  2. This was a very good ending because Nora is still leaving torvald but I think Nora should have cared for her children more.

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